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I wanted nothing.
And you got everything. "
Ahhh my gosh that ending, I actually really like this.
I myself have fought the internal battles of emotional poetry. There are just days where I want to sit and write about people who have wronged me, everything that has ever oppressed me, angry, sad, cathartic poems. Oh my gosh
I wish you didn't have such low opinion of yourself, you truly are not a bad poet at all. I would just recommend that you expand vocabulary a bit and explore a variety of subject matter.
Anywho, vocabulary is yo' best friend. Once you can find creative words to substitute universal words such as sobs, wounds, etc., your wriitng will improve tenfold. Slight rearranging of words can cause grand outcomes!
I am definitely going to read more of your lovely work, despite what I've said you have an interesting style~ :3
And I'm glad you think that I'm not too bad of a poet.